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Feedback on Assignment[edit]

Hi Timxue94,

After reading over your article, I think that you have done a great job. The information that you have collected is very informative and covers a variety of areas regarding the topic. Also, I like how you added quite a few different synonyms in your taxobox. I do have a few suggestions on how you could add to your page. The first would be to add some more points to the first section, just to provide some background information on the topic. The second would be to expand more on the section regarding human and animal diseases. For example, in the human disease section you mentioned that this species of fungi has been identified on individuals with chronic granulomatous disease. Maybe you could expand on what this is and how it occurs. Overall, great work!

AMB 132 (talk) 15:49, 30 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Great job! :D[edit]

Hi Tim, After I read your article, your disease section inspired me. For suggestion, I think you can put the content of Taxonomy, classification, and phylogeny into your first section because I think they are all background information for your fungus. Also, it would be better if you can use wikilinks like wikilink on certain terms. Other than that you did a great job. That's all I got for you, I am having a good time taking the class with you, hope you are as well. --Tonyxu114 (talk) 19:56, 30 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]